1. The toeory of this paper is not clear enough, please make sure it is logical to this paper. change it if it is nessasary.
2. Citation: The paper used only one souce for 80% of the context, you should use more than 6 citation totally based on instruction document.
3. You should heck every exisited sources, and most of the page number are not correct,
4. Don’t foget that the paper has 14 pages minimum requirement.
5.I’ll add more tips if we can finish this at onece.
6.The structure of this paper is not clear either, please read it first and chang it.
Souces and stucture is most important.
i’ve attachemted some exisiting souces for you.
thanks for helping me out!.