Hello I am retaking the last class that we worked on together and this teacher is a little different from the last one. I can re upload all of the work we did for the last class but we need to make changes according to his feedback. Below is his feedback on the assignment for week 1. If you remember the EFAS.

Overall Feedback

Wylie,

the Tesla case runs 2008-2010. Your year of reference for revenue changes due to strategic factors is 2010. Increases for opportunities, and decreases for threats.

In the comments for O1 you mention things from 2011 and 2017, which cannot be included because your period of scanning ends in 2010.

Please add numerals O1, O2, O3, O4, O5, T1, T2, T3, T4 and T5 in front of all external factors.

The comments for each SF does not support weights, nor rates. You must include a sentence of how much revenue would go up (opportunities) or down (threats) for each factor. This information is key to calculate weights.

How to calculate weights: Add ALL comments of increase/decrease of revenue from O1 to T5. Get a TOTAL, then calculate O1 revenue/TOTAL to get O1’s weight. Do the same with all SFs.

In terms of rates, you should add a sentence justifying the rate. Rates reflect how Tesla was performing in terms of each factor in 2010. For instance, if the SF is Battery Technology, then the rate reflects how Tesla was performing in battery technology by 2010. The scale is between 1-5, 3 is the average of the industry. Your rate for Battery Technology is 3, so it appears Tesla was the average player in this technology by 2010. I had the impression they were leading it by 2010, so I was expecting a higher rate … but I may be wrong.